2005年世界英语演讲比赛冠军

　　Crossing the Sea

　　By Liang Limin(梁励敏 北京外国语大学)

　　(获得第三届全国英语演讲比赛冠军)

　　专家点评:引用文学大师的诗句作为开场白，与结束语首尾呼应，颇有感染力。东西方文化的融合表现得十分鲜明

　　，意味深长，是篇优秀的演讲。

　　Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen. The title of my speech today is "Crossing the Sea" . An English  poet by the name of Rudyard Kipling once wrote in this poem "We and They" :

　　All the people like us are We

　　and everyone else is They

　　We live over the sea

　　While They live over the way

　　We eat pork and beef with cow horn-handled knives

　　They who gobble their rice off a leaf

　　Are horr

　　Facing this audience on the stage, I have the exciting feeling of participating in the march of history, for what we are facing today is more than a mere competition or contest. It is an assembly of some of China's most talented and motivated people, representatives of a younger generation that are preparing themselves for the coming of a new century.

　　I'm grateful that I've been given this opportunity, at such a historic moment, to stand here as a spokesman of my generation and to take a serious look back at the past 15

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　　演讲者：第11届“21世纪·澳门之星杯”全国英语演讲比赛冠军曹丰

　　1.i love my motherland there is abeatiful country standing in the east of the world.she has red soil,big mountains,long rivers and hardworking people,she is just like adiamond,shinning all the time,and she is my dearest country---china!

　　i love my motherland!because ilove the different races of my country!each race has its own culture and customs.some people are kindhearted,some people are ggenerous,some people are humourous.anyway,i can''t display evry race of my country,but what iwant to tell you is that the chinese peo

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　　第十届“21世纪杯”全国英语演讲比赛冠军——夏鹏

　　Let us join readers over the last century who have been excited by plain Jane ’s journey of self-discovery.

　　For a woman who was emotionally, socially and morally repressed for years, any public attention that could have been given to her was more than she could have hoped for. She was able to utilize her own experiences to create something that others could enjoy and she had every right to be proud of that. This woman is the author of Jane Eyre-Charlotte. Her experience was reflected on the character of Jane Eyre.

　　1.i love my motherland there is abeatiful country standing in the east of the world.she has red soil,big mountains,long rivers and hardworking people,she is just like adiamond,shinning all the time,and she is my dearest country---china!

　　i love my motherland!because ilove the different races of my country!each race has its own culture and customs.some people are kindhearted,some people are ggenerous,some people are humourous.anyway,i can''t display evry race of my country,but what iwant to tell you is that the chinese peo

　　Crossing the Sea

　　By Liang Limin(梁励敏 北京外国语大学)

　　(获得第三届全国英语演讲比赛冠军)

　　专家点评:引用文学大师的诗句作为开场白，与结束语首尾呼应，颇有感染力。东西方文化的融合表现得十分鲜明

　　，意味深长，是篇优秀的演讲。

　　Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen. The title of my speech today is "Crossing the Sea" . An English  poet by the name of Rudyard Kipling once wrote in this poem "We and They" :

　　All the people like us are We

　　and everyone else is They

　　We live over the sea

　　While They live over the way

　　We eat pork and beef with cow horn-handled knives

　　They who gobble their rice off a leaf

　　Are horr

　　Building Bridges for the Future

　　I’m studying in a city that’s famous for its walls. People who visit my city are amazed at the imposing sight of its walls, especially when silhouetted against the setting sun with gold, shining streaks. The old, cracked bricks are covered with lichens and the walls are weather-beaten guards standing still for centuries.

　　Our ancestors liked to build walls. They built walls in Beijing, Xi’an, Nanjing and many other cities, and they built the Great Wall, which snakes across half our country

　　本文曾获得北京电视台、国家教育部举办的 My teacher 英语演讲比赛优胜奖。在以“我的老师”为主题的演讲会上，这篇演讲出人意料地将计算机称作自己的老师，以吸引听众的注意。然后又用事实与推理证明计算机确实是一个“老师”，从而赢得了听众的共鸣。某些语言上的不足之处点评修改如下：

　　(1)在every后，territory用复数，显然是错误的。另外，表示“各个领域”，用field为好。

　　(2)原文时态用错了。

　　(3)concept是可数名词。make后的宾语补语如果是不定式的话，要省略to。另外，一般不用被动不定式，而只用过去分词。deeply也有中国式英语之嫌。

　　(4)help sb. (to)do，不用 doing。

　　Ladies and gentlemen,

　　I have had a lot of teachers in my school who have given me much help in my study. For their help I will never forget them. But today I am going to talk about a special teacher of mine.